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Write a letter to ask for an extension for rent

Write a letter to ask for an extension for rent GN892
Dear John, I am writing this letter to complain about the evening International Media course in our school. To introduce myself, I am John Kapoor studying in 11th standard. I've opted International Media course as I am very much interested in media. I would like to bring this to notice that the syllabus covered during the class is obsolete and outdated. Having an immense interest in International media, to know who media works in other parts of the country, so I decided to choose this course. Unfortunately, the course curriculum shared with all of us before commencing the course was very exciting, but what is being taught is easily available online. I thought I would get to know something new and better. I would like to request you if committee revise the course and add the latest topics in the course. This will help students to build the motivation to attend the course. Waiting to hear from you Yours faithfully, Nandini Sethi
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to complain about the evening International
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Media
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course
in our school.

To introduce myself, I am John
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Kapoor
studying in 11th standard. I've opted International
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Media
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course
as I am
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very
much interested in
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media
. I would like to bring this to notice that the syllabus covered during the
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class
is obsolete and outdated.

Having an immense interest in International
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media
, to know who
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media
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works
in other parts of the country,
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so
I decided to choose this
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course
. Unfortunately, the
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course
curriculum shared with all of us
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before
commencing the
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course
was
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very
exciting,
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but
what is
being taught
is
easily
available online. I
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thought
I would
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get
to know something new and better.

I would like to request you if committee revise the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
and
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add
the latest topics in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
students to build the motivation to attend the course.

Waiting to hear from you

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nandini
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Sethi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to ask for an extension for rent

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  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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