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Write a letter to Anton Galdes

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Dear Mr Galdes, I am writing to apologize for the trouble caused. there is a malfunction of our company's computers. We cannot log in to them correctly and that is why we have not completed the payment yet. Technical support members to fix this problem are hired as soon as and we are hoping that the trouble will not happen anymore. We are expecting this will be solved by the end of today. Kind regards, Kaho
Dear Mr
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Galdes
,

I am writing to apologize for the trouble caused.
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there
is a malfunction of our
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company
's computers. We cannot log in to them
correctly
and
that is
why we have not completed the payment
yet
. Technical support members to
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fix
this problem
are hired
as
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soon
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as and
we are hoping that the trouble will not happen anymore. We are expecting this will
be solved
by the
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end
of
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today
.

Kind regards,

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Kaho

IELTS letter Write a letter to Anton Galdes

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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