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You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take

You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take 2bxVx
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the food processor I bought from your online TV channel on 15th of January 2020. I have watched its advertisement on your shopping channel. Unfortunately, I am dissatisfied with the delivered food processor. The food processor which I ordered is out of order and does not work at all. The multifunctions of processor that were advertised, is not working. Also, the features which were shown in the advertisement are not available. Another deficiency which I observed that the blender jug is also crack. There are a lot of tiny cracks on jug. However, rest of the functions are also not functioning. When I tried to blend a mixture, it does not work even once. For these reasons, I would ask you either to refund the purchase price in full or send me a replacement food processor. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your Faithfully, Syed Aariz Raza
Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about the
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food
processor I
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bought
from your online TV channel on 15th of January 2020. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
its advertisement on your shopping channel. Unfortunately, I
am dissatisfied
with the delivered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
processor.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
processor which I ordered is out of order and does not work at all. The
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multifunctions
of processor that
were advertised
, is not working.
Also
, the features which
were shown
in the advertisement are not available. Another deficiency which I observed that the blender jug is
also
crack. There are
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a lot of
tiny cracks on jug.
However
, rest of the functions are
also
not functioning. When I tried to blend a mixture, it does not work even once.

For these reasons, I would ask you either to refund the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
price in full or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a replacement
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
processor.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

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Your
Faithfully
,

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Syed
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Aariz
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Raza
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IELTS letter You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take

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  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
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