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Dear Mrs. Ngo, Thank you for assisting us with the registration for Canada Education Fair in Vietnam starting on March 2020. This is the great opportunity for us to meet with not only the prospect students and their parents, but also the local agents in Vietnam. Due to the concerns arising from the current 2019-nCov outbreak, the board of school management has decided to withdraw the school from the above-noted event. The situation in Vietnam is under control, and we always wish to attend the event in the near future. This incident has occurred suddenly in the beginning of Lunar New Year in Vietnam, when all business is closed until January 29, 2020. As a result, we were unable to inform you earlier to meet the deadline for refund. As we both was unable to expect this to happen, we hope you can consider to refund us the full amount we deposited for the event. If there is any question, please do not hesitate to contact us. Best Regards,
Dear Mrs.
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Thank you for assisting us with the registration for Canada Education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Fair
in Vietnam starting on March 2020. This is the great opportunity for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with not
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only
the prospect students and their parents,
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but
also
the local agents in Vietnam.

Due to the concerns arising from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
2019-nCov outbreak, the board of school management has decided to withdraw the school from the above-noted
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. The situation in Vietnam is under control, and we always wish to attend the
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event
in the near future.

This incident has occurred
suddenly
in the beginning of Lunar New Year in Vietnam, when all business
is closed
until January 29, 2020.
As a result
, we were unable to inform you earlier to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the deadline for refund. As we both was unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
this to happen, we hope you can
The verb 'consider' is used with the gerund form: "consider refunding".
consider to refund
us the full amount we deposited for the
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event
.

If there is any question,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not hesitate to contact us.

Best Regards,

IELTS letter Write a letter to your partner to cancel an appointment

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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