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Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs. g5qdA
Dear Dave, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask request you to send me the photographs which we took last week on trip to England. It was really a memorable visit for us. I was really excited about it and i am really happy how it turned out. For me the best part of trip was visiting the heritage museum and salam Mall. I am glad that we captured our moments of joy thanks to your 40 mega pixel sonay digital camera. I hope that you have already developed selected pictures digitally, therefore, send me a soft copy on my email address faff@yahoo. com. Could you please tell me that you framed our which pictures. Please also suggest me that which one will be suitable for me to hang on my bedroom wall. Hoping to receive photographs soon!
Dear Dave,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask request you to
send
me the photographs which we took last week on trip to England.

It was
really
a memorable visit for us. I was
really
excited about it and
i
am
really
happy how it turned out. For me the best part of trip was visiting the heritage museum and
salam
Mall. I am glad that we captured our moments of joy thanks to your 40 mega pixel
sonay
digital camera.

I hope that you have already developed selected pictures
digitally
,
therefore
,
send
me a soft copy on my email address
faff@yahoo
.
com
.

Could you
please
tell
me that you framed our which pictures.
Please
also
suggest me that which one will be suitable for me to hang on my bedroom wall.

Hoping to receive photographs
soon
!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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