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Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs. g5qdA

Dear Dave, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask request you to send me the photographs which we took last week on trip to England. It was really a memorable visit for us. I was really excited about it and i am really happy how it turned out. For me the best part of trip was visiting the heritage museum and salam Mall. I am glad that we captured our moments of joy thanks to your 40 mega pixel sonay digital camera. I hope that you have already developed selected pictures digitally, therefore, send me a soft copy on my email address faff@yahoo. com. Could you please tell me that you framed our which pictures. Please also suggest me that which one will be suitable for me to hang on my bedroom wall. Hoping to receive photographs soon!

Dear Dave,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to ask request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the photographs which we took last week on trip to England.

It was really
 a memorable visit for us. I was really
 excited about it and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 am really
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 digital camera.

I hope that you have already developed selected pictures digitally
, therefore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me a soft copy on my email address Possible spelling mistake found.
faff@yahoo
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com
.

Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me that you framed our which pictures. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
also
 suggest me that which one will be suitable for me to hang on my bedroom wall.

Hoping to receive photographs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
! 

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

151 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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