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Complain regarding housemate. Explain the condition any your openion on this topic

Complain regarding housemate. Explain the condition any your openion on this topic MM32N
Let me explain my situation, my new housemate is increasingly playing loud music throughout nigh and sleeping in day time. Even many times, talking on the phone for long hours and disturbing me. And frequent visits of his friends making the situation worse. Due to the disturbance I am not getting sound sleep thus, not able to focus on studies. I am worried, if this scenario will continue, what will happen to my academic grades. Would you kindly transfer me to some other room or change my roommate. I have no problem with living a person who is quieter and considerable for others. Even if single accomodation is provided to me, it will be a great favour to me. Thank you for considering my request. Your's Faithfully Padminee Chauhan
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explain
my situation, my new housemate is
increasingly
playing loud music throughout nigh and sleeping in day time. Even
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many
times, talking on the phone for long hours and disturbing me. And frequent visits of his friends making the situation worse. Due to the disturbance I am not getting sound sleep
thus
, not able to focus on studies. I
am worried
, if this scenario will continue, what will happen to my academic grades.

Would you kindly transfer me to
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some
other room or
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change
my roommate. I have no problem with living a person who is quieter and considerable for others. Even if single
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accomodation
is provided
to me, it will be a great
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favour
to me.

Thank you for considering my request.

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Your's
Faithfully


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Padminee
Chauhan
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IELTS letter Complain regarding housemate. Explain the condition any your openion on this topic

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128 words
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