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Yours friend is coming next month but you have some urgent work and hence you cannot receive her at the airport

Yours friend is coming next month but you have some urgent work and hence you cannot receive her at the airport RVydQ
Dear pooja, I am feeling very happy that you are arriving next month. I am so excited to meet you and i am sure that days will crucial with catching a lot of memories. However, I would not able to receive you at the airport. I am extremely sorry about that. Today morning, when i went my boss for ask about leave for next month, he informed me that would be inspection in my company from foreign department. In addition, they would be seven days in weeks and no staff will be able to leave notes. Presence must require. Therefore, no worries about that i am going to take some arrangements for you. One of my best friend that stay near the airport consequently, they would pick up and directly drop my house. We can meet at my home when i come back from my office. We will have a good time together because your stay is longer than the inspection period. Again, I apologise, but that you will understand my problem. Bye, Seema Sharma
Dear
pooja
, I am feeling
very
happy that you are arriving
next
month. I am
so
excited to
meet
you and
i
am sure that days will crucial with catching
a lot of
memories.
However
, I would not able to receive you at the airport. I am
extremely
sorry about that.
Today morning
, when
i
went my boss for ask about
leave
for
next
month, he informed me that would be inspection in my
company
from foreign department.
In addition
, they would be seven days in weeks and no staff will be able to
leave
notes. Presence
must
require.
Therefore
, no worries about that
i
am going to take
some
arrangements for you. One of my best friend that stay near the airport
consequently
, they would pick up and
directly
drop my
house
. We can
meet
at my home when
i
come
back from my office. We will have a
good
time together
because
your stay is longer than the inspection period. Again, I
apologise
,
but
that you will understand my problem. Bye,
Seema
Sharma
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IELTS letter Yours friend is coming next month but you have some urgent work and hence you cannot receive her at the airport

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
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