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inconvenience with the room mate so requesting a new room 1. why new room 2. what problem 3. what to do

inconvenience with the room mate so requesting a new room 1. why new room 2. what problem 3. what to do JqLRa

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my discontent and discomfort I have been experiencing with the irrational behavior of my roommate Mark and request you to arrange new room in the next semester. I live in room 204, on the second floor of the Resident hall. Ever since I moved into this room, having hard time concentrating on my studies. My roommate friends gather every night and hold parties, as a matter of fact, I am not sure if such loud music is allowed in the hostel at late nights, this happens several times a month. Besides, he borrows my things without asking and never returns, moreover, due to his misbehavior, he lost a book borrowed from library, resulting, a fine which I needed to pay. Thus, I cannot handle this situation any longer as, I will not be able to withstand Mark. Consequently, please allow me to move into another room in the next term. Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
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