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Write a letter to an agency to participate in the volunteer program

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Dear Sir Madam, I am writing to you with regard to your ad in The Suns daily publication, looking for volunteers to help run the proposed charity event "Fight against poverty" to be held in London. I am majoring in Event management and have a great deal of empathy for those less fortunate than us, as such I feel I am ideally suitable to be part of your team and help you organize this event and make it a success. Let me give you a few of my previous participations, I was part of the Newcastle's first fundraising event for the homeless which has now become an annual occurrence. Additionally, I was also part of London's record breaking fundraiser "Right to education" in 2019 which helped raise over a million pounds and has helped educate over two hundred thousand children inseveral impoverished nations. I am part of my university's student council and as such can help amplify your message in the varsity's campus this increasing awareness on this vital social issue. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Mohsin
Dear Sir Madam,

I am writing to you with regard to your ad in The Suns daily publication, looking for volunteers to
help
run the proposed charity
event
"
Fight against poverty
"
to
be held
in London. I am majoring in
Event
management and have a great deal of empathy for those less fortunate than us, as such I feel I am
ideally
suitable to be
part
of your team and
help
you organize this
event
and
make
it a success.

Let
me give you a few of my previous
participations
, I was
part
of the Newcastle's
first
fundraising
event
for the homeless which has
now
become an annual occurrence.
Additionally
, I was
also
part
of London's
record breaking
fundraiser
"
Right to education
"
in 2019 which
helped
raise over a million pounds and has
helped
educate over two hundred thousand children
inseveral
impoverished nations.

I am
part
of my university's student council and as such can
help
amplify your message in the varsity's campus this increasing awareness on this vital social issue.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mohsin
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an agency to participate in the volunteer program

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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