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Hi David, I’m sorry that I haven’t written earlier. We didn't have any nets in Antarctica. We’ve used radio messages there. Thanks for introducing me to that company. I got a perfect job with a lot of trips and missions around the world. It’s a great experience and I would like to invite you to the South Pole. We’ll have nice days and nights. We can see a lot of stars at night. I’ve been working hard since I went to Antarctica. Some days I was extremely exhausted, but I haven’t stopped my work. We search in deep ice for each kind of ancient virus and then study them in a lab. I love this job. Also, I see many areas with different panoramas. I’ve found a new kind of virus that we haven’t seen before. So, we’ve extracted DNA and sent it to the Wuhan laboratory. They are called Coronavirus, and they’ve spread around the world. We need some stronger viruses if we need to decrease the world’s population. Thank you again for everything, and I promise that if I find a new virus, I’ll call it David! Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Houshang, PS I attached the Coronavirus picture.
Hi David,

I’m sorry that I haven’t written earlier. We didn't have any nets in Antarctica. We’ve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
radio messages there.

Thanks for introducing me to that
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company
. I
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got
a perfect job with
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a lot of
trips and missions around the world. It’s a great experience and I would like to invite you to the South Pole. We’ll have nice days and nights. We can
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see
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a lot of
stars at night.

I’ve been working
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hard
since I went to Antarctica.
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Some
days I was
extremely
exhausted,
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but
I haven’t
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stopped
my work. We search in deep ice for each kind of ancient virus and then study them in a lab. I
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love
this job.
Also
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
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many
areas with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
panoramas.

I’ve found a new kind of virus that we haven’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
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before
.
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So
, we’ve extracted DNA and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
it to the Wuhan laboratory. They
are called
Coronavirus, and they’ve spread around the world. We need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
stronger viruses if we need to decrease the world’s population.

Thank you again for everything, and I promise that if I find a new virus, I’ll call it David!

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Best wishes,

Houshang,

PS I attached the Coronavirus picture.
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IELTS letter email to thanks a good friend

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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