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Write a letter to accomodation manager

Write a letter to accomodation manager xa66g

Hi Sir/Madam Last week I got a enrollment letter from your university for BSC Mathematics. Classes will be begins on next month. As I heard from others you are offering rooms both inside and outside the college. I prefer to have hostel inside my university because I am lazy to wake up early and I dont like to travel to college. I am writing this letter to request you to provide a room inside the college. If you can provide me a single room in a ground floor would be more better. I have a history of health issue due to allergy. So I am afraid of sharing rooms. If you don't have single room in ground floor you can accomodate me in second or third floor. I would like to request you to supply a chair, table and a fan. Can you provide me early your canteen menu because am a vegetarian. If you are not supplying a vegetarian food then i can search for a near by restaurant. I would be grateful if you could send me the details as early. Yours faithfully Rintu

Hi Sir/Madam

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got
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begins
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rooms
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because
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 like to travel to college. I am writing this letter to request you to provide a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you can provide me a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
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ground floor
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more better
. I have a history of health issue due to allergy. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I am afraid of sharing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
. If you don't have single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 in This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
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accomodate
 me in second or third floor.

I would like to request you to supply a chair, table and a fan. Can you provide me early your canteen menu This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 am a vegetarian. If you are not supplying a vegetarian food then Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can search for a Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
 restaurant.

I would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 as early.

Yours faithfully


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