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Dear Sam, Thank you in advance for looking after my house and my lovely puppies when I am on vacation. You know how excited I am to go to Bali! It is indeed a dream coming true now. I just want to let you know that my house has just been renovated and since you haven’t been to my place for a couple of months, you have to use the stairs next to the car park instead using the main entrance door. The ground floor will not be accessible and will be locked for maintenance reasons. I need to mention a couple of things which you need to look after during my absence. My dogs will be staying on the top floor and I will be very grateful if you can feed them thrice a week. Last not least, could you please clean the dogs poop as well. Please feel free to contact me in case of any emergencies on my cell phone 04245681112 or via email as well xxyyzz@gmail. com. Yes I know, I have not forgotten your treat as I owe you this one mate! Thank you once again for your help. See you soon, Jane
Dear Sam,

Thank you in advance for looking after my
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house
and my lovely puppies when I am on vacation. You know how excited I am to go to Bali! It is
indeed
a dream coming true
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now
.

I
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just
want to
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let
you know that my
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house
has
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just
been renovated
and since you haven’t been to my place for a couple of months, you
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have to
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use
the stairs
next
to the car park
instead
using the main entrance door. The
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?
ground floor
will not be accessible and will
be locked
for maintenance reasons.

I need to mention a couple of things which you need to look after during my absence. My dogs will be staying on the top floor and I will be
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very
grateful if you can feed them thrice a week.

Last not least, could you
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please
clean the dogs
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poop
as well
.
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Please
feel free to contact me in case of any emergencies on my cell phone 04245681112 or via email
as well
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xxyyzz@gmail
.
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com
. Yes I know, I have not forgotten your treat as I owe you this one mate!

Thank you once again for your
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help
.

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See
you
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soon
,

Jane

IELTS letter Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain:

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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