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Write a letter to a supplier in Singapore to request for sole distribution rights of a product in Danang city. In your letter, please let the supplier know who you are, what you have done, why you should be chosen to be the sole distributor to get their trust and acceptance. (150 words)

Write a letter to a supplier in Singapore to request for sole distribution rights of a product in Danang city. In your letter, please let the supplier know who you are, what you have done, why you should be chosen to be the sole distributor to get their trust and acceptance. (150 words) 0wVBl
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to request for sole distribution rights of a product in Danang city. My name is Ngoc Ha and I am a marketing manager of the beverage production company of Vina Group. I represent the group that wants to negotiate and become distributor of your beverage in Danang market. With 5 years of the experience and distribution of other soft drinks, we are confident that we are able to distribute and supply this product to consumers widely and in the best way. Realizing this potential, we look forward to receiving cooperation from your company for mutual benefits and better development of this product. I am sure you won’t be disappointed when you choose us as your distributor. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Thank you! Yours sincerely, Lai Ha
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to request for sole distribution rights of a product in
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Danang
city.

My name is
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Ngoc
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Ha and
I am a marketing manager of the beverage production
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company
of
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Vina
Group. I represent the group that wants to negotiate and become distributor of your beverage in
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Danang
market.

With 5 years of the experience and distribution of other soft drinks, we are confident that we are able to distribute and supply this product to consumers
widely
and in the best way. Realizing this potential, we look forward to receiving cooperation from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for mutual benefits and better development of this product. I am sure you won’t
be disappointed
when you choose us as your distributor.

I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Thank you!

Yours
sincerely
,

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Lai
Ha
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a supplier in Singapore to request for sole distribution rights of a product in Danang city. In your letter, please let the supplier know who you are, what you have done, why you should be chosen to be the sole distributor to get their trust and acceptance. (150 words)

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  American English
7 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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