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After an interview, you write a letter to the compan to show your apperciation ( FORMAL) + Explain your appreciation + Describe how the interview affect you + Say that you look

After an interview, you write a letter to the compan to show your apperciation ( FORMAL) + Explain your appreciation + Describe how the interview affect you + Say that you look Nw6Wd
Dear Sir, I am writing to thank you for the interview dated 12 September 2021. I am Ngoc Ha - one of the candidates for the position of Human resources manager for the company. I was very delighted to have chance to directly contact the Board of Directors and I highly appreciated the initial meeting with all of you. The first impression coming to my mind was your good and professional working environment, which gives us comfortable feeling to work in. I do love competitive opportunities, good benefits you have given to your employees. Also, through the interview, I really admired the way you manage and behave with your staff. These are exactly what I have been looking for to whole-hearted effort and contribute. Thanks for the direct contact with the Board of Directors, I can feel how happy your working place is. In addition, I can have a better understanding of the company and the duties of HR Manager. Once again, thank you for the interview. I hope to receive good news from the company. Yours sincerely, Lai Ha
Dear Sir,

I am writing to thank you for the interview dated 12 September 2021. I am
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one of the candidates for the position of Human resources manager for the
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company
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I
was
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very
delighted to have chance to
directly
contact the Board of Directors and I
highly
appreciated the initial meeting with all of you.

The
first
impression coming to my mind was your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and professional working environment, which gives us comfortable feeling to work in. I do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
competitive opportunities,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
benefits you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to your employees.
Also
, through the interview, I
really
admired the way you manage and behave with your staff. These are exactly what I have been looking for to whole-hearted effort and contribute.

Thanks for the direct contact with the Board of Directors, I can feel how happy your working place is.
In addition
, I can have a better understanding of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and the duties of HR Manager.

Once again, thank you for the interview. I hope to receive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Lai
Ha
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IELTS letter After an interview, you write a letter to the compan to show your apperciation ( FORMAL) + Explain your appreciation + Describe how the interview affect you + Say that you look

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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