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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

Dear Elaine, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival Deepawali with us this year. While we were studying together last year, you promised to visit me and believe me, this is the best time of the year to come to India. Deepawali is our national festival. It falls in the month of October or November. It literally means rows of lights. It is celebrated to commemorate the return of Lord Rama to Ayodhya after fourteen years of exile. This is one festival which all Indians celebrate. A month before Deepawali, we whitewash our homes and buy new clothes to wear on that day. On the day of Deepawali we worship Goddess Lakshmi, the symbol of wealth and also burn crackers. There is lots of fun and frolic. Ever since I finished my course at Leeds University and came back home, I have talked so much about you to my parents that they are all very eager to see you. Moreover, it will help you in the project you are doing on ‘Globalisation and Tradition’. You will see that we Indians have not forgotten our traditional celebrations even if we have become a part of the global village which is influenced by the western culture. We would be honoured to have you as our guest for your entire stay here. You are welcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. I assure you we will make it a memorable holiday for you. Hoping to see you soon! Yours lovingly, Kiran
Dear Elaine,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival Deepawali with us this
year
. While we were studying together last
year
, you promised to visit me and believe me, this is the best time of the
year
to
come
to India.

Deepawali is our national festival. It falls in the month of October or November. It
literally
means rows of lights.
It
is celebrated
to commemorate the return of Lord Rama to Ayodhya after fourteen years of exile. This is one festival which all Indians celebrate. A month
before
Deepawali, we whitewash our homes and
buy
new clothes to wear on that day. On the day of Deepawali we worship Goddess Lakshmi, the symbol of wealth and
also
burn crackers. There is lots of fun and frolic.

Ever since I finished my course at Leeds University and came back home, I have talked
so
much about you to my parents that they are all
very
eager to
see
you.
Moreover
, it will
help
you in the project you are doing on ‘
Globalisation
and Tradition’. You will
see
that we Indians have not forgotten our traditional celebrations even if we have become a part of the global village which
is influenced
by the western culture.

We would be
honoured
to have you as our guest for your entire stay here. You are welcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. I assure you we will
make
it a memorable holiday for you.

Hoping to
see
you
soon
!

Yours
lovingly
, Kiran
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IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

Letter
  American English
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271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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