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Write a letter to a singer and explain how you feel about his performance give details of your music activities and explain how you would like him to help you with your activities.

Write a letter to a singer and explain how you feel about his performance give details of your music activities and explain how you would like him to help you with your activities. XnjOE
Dear Mr. James, I am one of the spectators of your singing concert held yesterday at Iscon stadium. Your performance was fabulous, mind blowing and I have to say that I extremely enjoyed the song that you sang. Since, you performed outstanding, I completely lost myself in the song as the melody and lyrics were superb. Recently, I was selected as a representative of my college for upcoming national level guitar competition organized by Student union of London. Since, you have expertise in playing guitar, I also want to have the same. Therefore, I needs a number of valuable tips regarding the handling techniques of guitar which will help me to hone my skill which in turn, offers me a milestone in competition. I hope, you have a soft corner for me and gives me your precious time For my practice. Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Carolina.
Dear Mr. James, I am one of the spectators of your singing concert held yesterday at
Iscon
stadium. Your performance was fabulous,
mind blowing
and I
have to
say that I
extremely
enjoyed the song that you sang. Since, you performed outstanding, I completely lost myself in the song as the melody and lyrics were superb. Recently, I
was selected
as a representative of my college for upcoming national level guitar competition organized by Student union of London. Since, you have expertise in playing guitar, I
also
want to have the same.
Therefore
, I
needs
a number of valuable tips regarding the handling techniques of guitar which will
help
me to hone my
skill
which in turn, offers me a milestone in competition. I hope, you have a soft corner for me and gives me your precious time For my practice. Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
faithfully
, Carolina.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a singer and explain how you feel about his performance give details of your music activities and explain how you would like him to help you with your activities.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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