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The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council.

The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council. MmjOp
Dear sirI am writing this letter concerning the decline in standards on the highway and byway at our street, green avenue, peterson. i have been living here for over 10 years and was always proud of the way our town looked, but the current statebof disrepair and neglect is disappointing. The footpath is now badly in need of repair band it is totally overgrown with weeds let alone all the accumulated rubbish. It is a major hazard to children and to the eldery who could easily have a serious accident.
Dear
sirI
am
writing this letter concerning the decline in standards on the highway and byway at our street, green avenue,
peterson
.
i
have been living here for over 10 years and was always proud of the way our town looked,
but
the
current
statebof
disrepair and neglect is disappointing. The footpath is
now
badly
in need of repair band it is
totally
overgrown with weeds
let
alone all the accumulated rubbish. It is a major hazard to children and to the
eldery
who could
easily
have a serious accident.
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IELTS letter The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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