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The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council.

The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council. MmjOp

Dear sirI am writing this letter concerning the decline in standards on the highway and byway at our street, green avenue, peterson. i have been living here for over 10 years and was always proud of the way our town looked, but the current statebof disrepair and neglect is disappointing. The footpath is now badly in need of repair band it is totally overgrown with weeds let alone all the accumulated rubbish. It is a major hazard to children and to the eldery who could easily have a serious accident.

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IELTS letter The street where you live is in poor cobdition. Write a letter to city council.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

90 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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