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Write a letter to a manager of a channel and give them some suggestions

Write a letter to a manager of a channel and give them some suggestions NMx7y
Dear Sir Ali, i have long been one of your fan. Your channel had been the most amazing and entertainmenitin channel that i always enjoyed to watch its programs. But recently your channel has lost its quality that made me to write this letter to you. Since evening is considered as a reunian time for the familiesy therefore an interesting program that covers the interest of most of the family can be helpful to absorb most viowes and consequently more advertisment. In fact its catching 2 birds with one stone. In my opinion because in the afternoon people from different age will watch Tv so the programs such as comedy, game show. wildlife documenteries, reality show can be considered as the most populare issues among the people of different age. Hopefuly my reasons and my suggestion be logical and interesting enough to draw your attention. and by making some changes we see the more success of your channel. Yours faithfully Diana
Dear Sir Ali,
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have long been one of your fan. Your channel had been the most amazing and
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entertainmenitin
channel that
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i
always enjoyed to
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watch
its programs.
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But
recently your channel has lost its quality that made me to write this letter to you. Since evening
is considered
as a
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reunian
time for the
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familiesy
therefore
an interesting program that covers the interest of most of the family can be helpful to absorb most
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viowes
and
consequently
more
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advertisment
. In fact its catching 2 birds with one stone.

In my opinion
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because
in the afternoon
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people
from
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different
age will
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watch
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Tv
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so
the programs such as comedy, game
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show
.
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wildlife
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documenteries
, reality
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show
can
be considered
as the most
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populare
issues among the
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people
of
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different
age.

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Hopefuly
my reasons and my suggestion be logical and interesting
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enough
to draw your attention.
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and
by making
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some
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changes
we
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see
the more success of your channel.

Yours
faithfully


Diana
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a manager of a channel and give them some suggestions

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  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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