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As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Sophia Smith, a part of the social survey project which has been organizing every year by a small group. Currently, I am creating one group to visit your historical exhibition at Mahudi. I am writing this letter to inquire about basic and necessary information about this exhibition. We make such kinds of groups every summer to visit and explore our skills in various fields. It does not only help to improve our general knowledge but also expand our thinking criteria. Firstly, I want to ask about the contents of the show such as what kind of products will be there and what will be covered during this festival. All the members are excited to visit you as history represents our culture and tradition. In addition, Can you please provide me with the starting date, ending date and timings? Therefore, I can inform all the group members to adjust their other plans accordingly. Due to this competitive atmosphere in the market, everyone has been providing great offers and coupons on the shopping. I hope that we will get huge discounts on the purchase. It will not only be fruitful for your business but also attract more customers to visit. We are eagerly waiting for your response to schedule it. Yours sincerely, Sophia Smith
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Sophia Smith, a part of the social survey project which has been organizing every year by a
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Currently
, I am creating one
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group
to visit your historical exhibition at
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Mahudi
. I am writing this letter to inquire about basic and necessary information about this exhibition.

We
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make
such kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
every summer to visit and explore our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in various fields. It does not
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only
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help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
our general knowledge
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but
also
expand our thinking criteria.

Firstly
, I want to ask about the contents of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
such as what kind of products will be there and what will
be covered
during this festival. All the members
are excited
to visit you as history represents our culture and tradition.
In addition
, Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide me with the starting date, ending date and timings?
Therefore
, I can inform all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
members to adjust their other plans
accordingly
.

Due to this competitive atmosphere in the market, everyone has been providing great offers and coupons on the shopping. I hope that we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
huge discounts on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. It will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be fruitful for your business
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
attract more customers to visit.

We are
eagerly
waiting for your response to schedule it.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sophia Smith
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IELTS letter As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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