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Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country - express your appreciation of the invitation - write the date of the visit - write about the things you want to do there?

Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country - express your appreciation of the invitation - write the date of the visit - write about the things you want to do there? GNrBL
Dear Richard I hope this letter finds you in great health and radiant. I’m thanking to you for inviting me to France. It hadn't’t been thinking before that I would get a chance to go France because it’s very difficult to get a visa for this nation. However, because of your invitation and the job letter of your company have made it possible. I’ll never forget your favor. In the next month one of my friend are getting married due to which i couldn’t come before attending his wedding. So, i’m planning to book my tickets for the last week of june. Moreover, at that time the prices of tickets would be lower as compared to now. After coming to France, firstly i’ll meet you and we’ll go for the dinner in the Taj hotel which is one of the famous places in France. In addition to it, i’ll start my job after one week, just after visitng good places. I hope that i would be received by you at airport. Yours lovingly Elaine
Dear Richard

I hope this letter finds you in great health and radiant. I’m thanking to you for inviting me to France.

It hadn't’t been thinking
before
that I would
get
a chance to go France
because
it’s
very
difficult to
get
a visa for this nation.
However
,
because
of your invitation and the job letter of your
company
have made it possible. I’ll never forget your favor.

In the
next
month one of my friend are getting married due to which
i
couldn’t
come
before
attending his wedding.
So
,
i’m
planning to book my tickets for the last week of
june
.
Moreover
, at that time the prices of tickets would be lower
as
compared to
now
.

After coming to France,
firstly
i’ll
meet
you and we’ll go
for the dinner
in the
Taj
hotel which is one of the
famous
places in France.
In addition
to it,
i’ll
start
my job after one week,
just
after
visitng
good
places.

I hope that
i
would
be received
by you at airport.

Yours
lovingly


Elaine
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who invited you to visit them in their country - express your appreciation of the invitation - write the date of the visit - write about the things you want to do there?

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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