Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.

You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. 6NlJB
Dear Keith, Hope you are doing well. It has been tremendous pleasure to keep in touch with you through Facebook. I received your letter dated 23rd May and I felt extremely happy after realising that you are eager to know about our country's news top story. Well, to be honest, political news has always been eye-catching for me. Nowadays, India's fight against Corona Virus has stolen all the limelight. And how much our Prime Minister Mr. Narendra Modi has achieved in terms of Medical aids, Vaccination supply & Emergency equipment, has become talk of the town in recent news. Since this issue has media coverage all over the world, people are keen to know every minute update of this news. And as you know me, I am into medical field, and doing research on Corona disaster, it is going to help me in my research for sure. I am looking forward to receiving your feedback on my letter. Hope to see you soon. Lots of love, Ankita
Dear Keith,

Hope you are doing well. It has been tremendous pleasure to
keep
in touch with you through Facebook. I received your letter dated 23rd May and I felt
extremely
happy after
realising
that you are eager to know about our country's news top story.

Well, to be honest, political news has always been eye-catching for me. Nowadays, India's fight against
Corona Virus
has stolen all the limelight. And how much our Prime Minister Mr. Narendra
Modi
has achieved in terms of Medical aids, Vaccination supply & Emergency equipment, has become talk of the town in recent news.

Since this issue has media coverage all over the world,
people
are keen to know every minute update of this news. And as you know me, I am into medical field, and doing research on Corona disaster, it is going to
help
me in my research for sure.

I am looking forward to receiving your feedback on my letter.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Lots of
love
,

Ankita
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts