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Cover letter for a position of the Department Supervisor.

Cover letter for a position of the Department Supervisor. 6NLxG

Dear Mr, I'm a Department Manager with more than 8 years of experience in integrating procedures for high performance and providing training to up to 40 employees in a fast-developing company. It makes me an ideal candidate for the position of Department Supervisor. I consider this vacancy as an opportunity to progress. I achieve glass ceiling in my company, but I am sure, that can more. So, some words about my Background: -I coordinated and supervised the group of employees. Our team increased the number of issue documentation from 100 drawings per week to 200. It gave the opportunity to finish the project 6 month earlier. - I Maintained actual legal and quality procedures in our company. It helped to reduce human factor and became more productive. I am able to take on the responsibilities of this position immediately and hope to enhance your company by collaboration. Thank you for your time and consideration. I'm looking forward to learning more details about this position. I'm excited to speak with you further during the interview. If you have any questions, please, contact me by email. Best regards, Arsenteva Victoria

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