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Apply letter to the director of the Museum

Apply letter to the director of the Museum nRdJ2
Dear SirI'm writing to apply for the holiday job which you advertised morning nespaper. Let me introduce myself. I am Saidov T. 30 years old, an english teacher of school 2 of Zarafshon. My summer holiday begin and I want to work anywhere. Today morning newspaper I have read an advertising about a job working in the city Museum shop during the holiday. I immediately take the pen and begin to write a letter to you, that I think this job is fit for me. Working at the Museum shop is interesting, and I am really fascinated an anciant things and to find historical meanings of them. As you know working with strongly characters is not easy. But I am pretty social person and can easily to work with differently characters of customers. I look forward to hearing from you in the next week. Youth faithfully. Saidov T.
Dear
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SirI
'm writing to apply for the holiday job which you advertised morning
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nespaper
.
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Let
me introduce myself. I am
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Saidov
T. 30 years
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old
, an
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english
teacher of school 2 of
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Zarafshon
. My summer holiday
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begin
and I want to work anywhere.
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "this morning" is used.
Today morning
newspaper I have read an advertising about a job working in the city Museum shop during the holiday. I immediately take the pen and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
to write a letter to you, that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
this job
is fit
for me. Working at the Museum shop is interesting, and I am
really
fascinated an
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anciant
things and to find historical meanings of them.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know working with
strongly
characters is not easy.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I am pretty social person and can
easily
to work with
differently
characters of customers. I look forward to hearing from you in the
next
week. Youth
faithfully
.
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Saidov
T.

IELTS letter Apply letter to the director of the Museum

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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