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write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarly work

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the job advertisement that published on Sunday’s newspaper. I would like to inform you that I am willing to work in your museum voluntarily. Since I am a working women and live alone in this city far away from my family. I believe that, the best way to utilize the leisure is to invest in some kind of volunteerism. Certainly, my interest in history would make me the perfect fit for this work Hence, this is an unpaid job, so major qualities which I assume to have in a person is a good communication skills. Secondly, managing stress; thirdly, to work large team; lastly, most important should have a loud and clear voice. In cases I got selected I would like you know that I am available for this job on weekend 9. am to 5. 00pm I am looking forward for your response Yours faithfully, Nazia Aamir
Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter
in regards to
the job advertisement that published on Sunday’s newspaper. I would like to inform you that I am willing to work in your museum
voluntarily
.

Since I am a working women and
live
alone in this city far away from my family. I believe that, the best way to utilize the leisure is to invest in
some
kind of volunteerism.
Certainly
, my interest in history would
make
me the perfect fit for this work

Hence
, this is an unpaid job,
so
major qualities which I assume to have in a person is a
good
communication
skills
.
Secondly
, managing
stress
;
thirdly
, to work large team;
lastly
, most
important
should have a loud and
clear
voice.

In
cases I
got
selected I would like you know that I am available for this job on weekend 9.
am
to 5. 00pm

I am looking forward for your response

Yours
faithfully
,

Nazia
Aamir
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IELTS letter write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarly work

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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