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write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarly work

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the job advertisement that published on Sunday’s newspaper. I would like to inform you that I am willing to work in your museum voluntarily. Since I am a working women and live alone in this city far away from my family. I believe that, the best way to utilize the leisure is to invest in some kind of volunteerism. Certainly, my interest in history would make me the perfect fit for this work Hence, this is an unpaid job, so major qualities which I assume to have in a person is a good communication skills. Secondly, managing stress; thirdly, to work large team; lastly, most important should have a loud and clear voice. In cases I got selected I would like you know that I am available for this job on weekend 9. am to 5. 00pm I am looking forward for your response Yours faithfully, Nazia Aamir
Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
the job advertisement that published on Sunday’s newspaper. I would like to inform you that I am willing to work in your museum
voluntarily
.

Since I am a working women and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
alone in this city far away from my family. I believe that, the best way to utilize the leisure is to invest in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
kind of volunteerism.
Certainly
, my interest in history would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me the perfect fit for this work

Hence
, this is an unpaid job,
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so
major qualities which I assume to have in a person is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication
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skills
.
Secondly
, managing
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stress
;
thirdly
, to work large team;
lastly
, most
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important
should have a loud and
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clear
voice.

In
The comma is probably missing here: "cases, I".
cases I
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got
selected I would like you know that I am available for this job on weekend 9.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
am
to 5. 00pm

I am looking forward for your response

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarly work

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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