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Write a letter to a friend who has visited you a few days ago and has left his mobile at your place. Please mention - The visit he paid you and how you felt about it. - How you found his/her cell phone at your place. - Suggest ways of sending it back to him/her.

Write a letter to a friend who has visited you a few days ago and has left his mobile at your place. Please mention - The visit he paid you and how you felt about it. - How you found his/her cell phone at your place. - Suggest ways of sending it back to him/her. Wg0Qq
Dear Stephen, I’m writing to you regarding your last visit when you left your cell at my house on the 25th of May during my little sister’s birthday. All of my family members were happy due to your presence, which made my sister happy as well due to your magic and music. Many guests could not believe that you’d attend the program and sing for such a small event. Therefore, I can’t thank you enough. After ending the program, once I went to bed for the night; thereafter, I found your phone inside my room on top of my pillow. Then, I realised that it must be yours as the phone starts to ring continuously since you left my home. I’m planning to visit your place tomorrow when the mobile phone will be returned, which is very expensive, in my view and would be risky to send through the courier service. Therefore, I expect you to be at your place at next Thursday. I’m awaiting your response in case you have any other plans. All the best! Ryan Smith
Dear Stephen,

I’m writing to you regarding your last visit when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
your cell at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
on the 25th of May during my
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little
sister’s birthday.

All of my family members were happy due to your presence, which made my sister happy
as well
due to your magic and music.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
guests could not believe that you’d attend the program and sing for such a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.
Therefore
, I can’t thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
.

After ending the program, once I went to bed for the night; thereafter, I found your phone inside my room on top of my pillow. Then, I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be yours as the phone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
to ring
continuously
since you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my home.

I’m planning to visit your place tomorrow when the mobile phone will
be returned
, which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
expensive, in my view and would be risky to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
through the courier service.
Therefore
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you to be at your place at
next
Thursday.

I’m awaiting your response in case you have any other plans.

All the best!

Ryan Smith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who has visited you a few days ago and has left his mobile at your place. Please mention - The visit he paid you and how you felt about it. - How you found his/her cell phone at your place. - Suggest ways of sending it back to him/her.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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