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Write a letter to a teammate

Write a letter to a teammate G3QK2
Dear John, I'm sorry to hear about your accident, I wish I wish you're getting a lot better today. I'm afraid of writing late the manager wanted me to practiced a lot for the next match hence, didn't get adequate time to write for you The match on Sunday was undesirable. We had received 2 goals then eventually we lost the game 2 to 1, probably you weren't there to soccer winning. Although we played so bad, the manager got proud of us due to the fact that we aggrandized the quality of our playing and put the opponent in a lot of pressure. I think inclement weather was also to reprimand. It was really wet day and the pitch was really muddy. By the end of the game we were sliding around in the mud Everyone was fatigue.
Dear John, I'm sorry to hear about your accident,
I wish I wish
you're getting a lot better
today
. I'm afraid of writing late the manager wanted me
to practiced
a lot for the
next
match
hence
, didn't
get
adequate time to write for you The match on Sunday was undesirable. We had received 2 goals then
eventually
we lost the game 2 to 1,
probably
you weren't there to soccer winning. Although we played
so
bad
, the manager
got
proud of us due to the fact that we aggrandized the quality of our playing and put the opponent in
a lot of
pressure. I
think
inclement weather was
also
to reprimand. It was
really
wet day and the pitch was
really
muddy. By the
end
of the game we were sliding around in the mud Everyone was fatigue.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a teammate

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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