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Dear John, Long time no see. When was the last time we saw each other? It's great to hear from you. I'm listening to a song these days. It's EXO's " Paper Cut" song. And EXO is my idol. I've liked them for more than 4 years. EXO was established in 2011 and debuted to the public in 2012. EXO has 9 male members from different parts of Korea. Each boy has a different voice and strength but with the perfect combination of all the members, the fans can't help but be surprised. I like their songs very much. I always feel comfortable when I listen to it. EXO isn't only famous in Korea but they also have a lot of international fans. They went through a lot of hardships to get to where they are now, so I'm extremely proud of them. I love them more and more. I look forward to hearing from you. Then tell me about your favorite singer. Best wishes, Mary
Dear John,

Long time no
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see
. When was the last time we
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saw
each other? It's great to hear from you.

I'm listening to a song these days. It's
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EXO
's
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"
Paper
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Cut
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
song. And
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EXO
is my idol. I've liked them for more than 4 years.
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EXO
was established
in 2011 and debuted to the public in 2012.
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EXO
has 9 male members from
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different
parts of Korea. Each boy has a
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different
voice and strength
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but
with the perfect combination of all the members, the fans can't
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help
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but
be surprised
. I like their songs
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very
much. I always feel comfortable when I listen to it.
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EXO
isn't
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only
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famous
in Korea
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but
they
also
have
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a lot of
international fans. They went through
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a lot of
hardships to
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get
to where they are
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now
,
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so
I'm
extremely
proud of them. I
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love
them more and more.

I look forward to hearing from you. Then
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tell
me about your favorite singer.

Best wishes,

Mary
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IELTS letter write a letter about your favorite singer

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  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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