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You Recently Ordered a Small Item Online but When It Arrived It Was Unusable

You Recently Ordered a Small Item Online but When It Arrived It Was Unusable 9Be3j
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to let you know about the product that I had ordered online a week ago. Unfortunately, when I received it, it was inoperative. I was greatly dissatisfied with it. Let me inform you that I ordered a Wonderchef Turbo Chopper from your shopping site ‘Myntra. ’ I had spent a total of 2000 except delivery charges. Being it black in colour and with additional accessories such as greater, egg separator, and varied kinds of blades, it really costs me an arm and a leg. Within one week, I got it. On the face of it, it was certainly a useful item because I had been using it for many months. I was taken aback to see that it did not work well when I was using it. After struggling alot, I ascertained that its jar was broken and the blades were blunt. I could not prepare a large amount of meal on my birthday. Moreover, it had irreplaceable parts that infuriated me. I would like you to look into the matter and solve my predicament. Would you be kind enough to send another Chopper of the same brand? Am I able to get a jar with no faults? It had spoilt my birthday, but I do not want to make upcoming Christmas unsuccessful as I had invited my friends to dinner. That’s why I need it badly. Kindly deliver it to me as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to
let
you know about the product that I had ordered online a week ago. Unfortunately, when I received it, it was inoperative. I was
greatly
dissatisfied with it.

Let
me inform you that I ordered a
Wonderchef
Turbo Chopper from your shopping site ‘
Myntra
. ’ I had spent a total of 2000 except delivery charges. Being it
black in colour
and with additional accessories such as greater, egg separator, and varied kinds of blades, it
really
costs me an arm and a leg. Within one week, I
got
it.

On the face of it, it was
certainly
a useful item
because
I had been using it for
many
months. I
was taken
aback to
see
that it did not work well when I was using it. After struggling
alot
, I ascertained that its jar
was broken
and the blades were blunt. I could not prepare a large amount of meal on my birthday.
Moreover
, it had irreplaceable parts that infuriated me.

I would like you to look into the matter and solve my predicament. Would you be kind
enough
to
send
another Chopper of the same brand? Am I able to
get
a jar with no faults? It had
spoilt
my birthday,
but
I do not want to
make
upcoming Christmas unsuccessful as I had invited my friends to dinner. That’s why I need it
badly
. Kindly deliver it to me as
soon
as possible.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You Recently Ordered a Small Item Online but When It Arrived It Was Unusable

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  American English
7 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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