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Office working environment

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Hi, Today I am talking about my office environment. I am working here last couple of month. My colleagues are very much cooperative. They help us if I stuck any work. We gossiping, playing outdoor game, eating food and make a lots of fun. My boss are encrouge us and help us any kind of issues. It's really very good environment for us. But I face slightly politics when join in here. But now situation is better then.
Hi,
Today
I am talking about my office environment. I am working here last couple of month. My colleagues are
very
much cooperative. They
help
us if I stuck any work.
We gossiping
, playing outdoor game, eating food and
make
a lots
of fun. My boss are
encrouge
us and
help
us any kind of issues. It's
really
very
good
environment for us.
But
I face
slightly
politics when
join
in here.
But
now
situation is better
then
.
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IELTS letter Office working environment

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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