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Letter about incorrect information published in an article

Letter about incorrect information published in an article Bwj5V

Dear Sir Or Madam, I am writing this letter to drive your attention towards the incorrect information published in an article of your monthly magazine of Oct-2021, with the heading as “Historical Places To Visit 2021”. In the article it was mentioned that Jodhpur fort was conquered by East India Company and later on it came under the rule of British crown but in reality the Jodhpur fort was never conquered by either the East India Company or British Crown. It was always a princely state, which was attacked but Britishers were never able to conquer it. An international magazine, of your reputation making such mistakes doesn’t not only distorts the history of a location but also causes long term impacts on the travel business for such historical locations. So, I would suggest that going ahead whenever you are writing an article on historical places, do consult on the local historians who would not only walk you through history but also would share interesting trivia associated with the location. Looking forward to see the rectification of mistake, in the coming edition.

Dear Sir Or Madam,

I am writing this letter to drive your attention towards the incorrect information published in an article of your monthly magazine of Oct-2021, with the heading as “Historical Places To Visit 2021”.

In the article it was mentioned
 that Jodhpur fort was conquered
 by East India This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 and later on it came under the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 of British crown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in reality the Jodhpur fort was never conquered by either the East India This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 or British Crown. It was always a princely
 state, which was attacked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Britishers were never able to conquer it.

An international magazine, of your reputation making such mistakes You used a negation after a negated contracted verb. Did you mean simply "doesn’t"?doesn’t
doesn’t not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 distorts the history of a location This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 causes long term impacts on the travel business for such historical locations.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would suggest that going ahead whenever you are writing an article on historical places, do consult on the local historians who would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 walk you through history This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 would share interesting trivia associated with the location.

Looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the rectification of mistake, in the coming edition. 