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complaint about food processor

complaint about food processor 55O2m

Dear Sir/Madam, the reason I am writing to you is poor quality of a food processor, in your store two weeks ago. which I bought in your store two weeks ago. The first malfunction that I notice was safety lock that demanded applying of great force. My wife had to ask me for help, because she wasn't strong enough to push the safety lock though. Rediscovered and not a problem when tried to use the blender. I put some ice cream and milk in the blender and push the start button. It started working but suddenly got stuck in we were unable to use it since. I was very surprised to discover that many problems in a quite expensive model. Naturally, I returned the blender to you too to be replaced with a new one. Your assistance said that I would have to wait only a week. After two weeks the food processor has still not arrived. Finally, 4 weeks later, I was contacted by you are representative. Imagine my feeling when I learned from him that I cannot receive the same model of food processor as I bought. As a solution he offered that I upgrade my model to a better one and this too will take two weeks. I'm very disappointed with both the equipment and the service help I received. Therefore I expect a full refund of $180 as soon as possible. Yours faithfully

Dear Sir/Madam,

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help
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expect
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soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully