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Letter to a friend who I went on holiday with but when I got home I realized I left my wallet.

Letter to a friend who I went on holiday with but when I got home I realized I left my wallet. GrYr2
Dear Roger, I hope you’re doing well. I got home safely. Words can’t express my gratitude about our one week a holiday. It was amazing and I could never think of a wonderful holiday like you. We can plan of more holidays often. Actually I have bad news that I just realized I left my wallet at your house because I could have missed my train, my wallet is in your room where I stayed it is in the third drawer of the right cabinet. Could you please go and find it? If it’s not there than it should be on the left side of the second drawer. Is it possible for you to give me my wallet by tomorrow or this weekend near my office building at lunchtime if your giving my wallet in the week and then I can pick it up from the nearest train station near your house. I would be grateful if you could do that I look forward to hear from you. Best regards Andrew
Dear Roger,

I hope you’re doing well. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
home
safely
.

Words can’t express my gratitude about our one week a holiday. It was amazing and I could never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of a wonderful holiday like you. We can plan of more holidays
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often
.

Actually I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
news that I
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just
realized I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
at your
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house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I could have missed my train, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
is in your room where I stayed it is in the third drawer of the right cabinet. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
go and find it?
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
it’s not
Use "(there)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
there
than it should be on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side of the second drawer.

Is it possible for you to give me my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
by tomorrow or this weekend near my office building at lunchtime if
Did you mean "you're" or "you are"?
your
giving my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wallet
in the week and then I can pick it up from the nearest train station near your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

I would be grateful if you could do that I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Best regards

Andrew

IELTS letter Letter to a friend who I went on holiday with but when I got home I realized I left my wallet.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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