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Letter to Local Council to inform about damaged road

Letter to Local Council to inform about damaged road AP7Q1
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you about the damaged road right in front of my house. I am John Doe residing at house 6844 on overlook drive Hillsboro. A portion of the overlook drive in front of my house has developed pits in the past few weeks. Many kids play on the road during the daytime and I fear that someone might get injured. That road is not safe to drive during night and yesterday there was a minor accident. Hence I decided to immediately write to you before the problem worsens. I request you to send some people to repair the road immediately. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you about the damaged
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road
right in front of my
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house
.

I am John Doe residing at
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house
6844 on overlook drive Hillsboro.

A portion of the overlook drive in front of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
has developed pits in the past few weeks.

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Many
kids play on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
during the daytime and I fear that someone might
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get
injured.

That
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
is not safe to drive during night and yesterday there was a minor accident.

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Hence
I decided to immediately write to you
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before
the problem worsens.

I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
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some
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people
to repair the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
immediately.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Doe
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IELTS letter Letter to Local Council to inform about damaged road

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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