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ticket

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less of and historical places and could do

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IELTS letter Historical site not visited by local

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  American English
8 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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