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Write a letter to a friend. Tell your friend about a new hobby that you have just started doing. Explain what you like about it. Write between 100 – 120 words.

Write a letter to a friend. Tell your friend about a new hobby that you have just started doing. Explain what you like about it. Write between 100 – 120 words. 737oY
Dear AswathyI hope you are well. It is been ages since I have heard from you. I am writing to let you know that I started practicising dance. Recently, I have joined at Anugaraha Dance School to learn Bharatanatyam. Among the different areas in classical dance, I am learning the Bharatanatyam. You know that I am fond of classical dance. Firstly, it is difficult to coordinate the steps with the music. But now I am enjoying each and every moment. Whenever I dance I feel that I am stepping into a new realm. I know that you also love to dance, The teachers and students are very supportive. I practice two to three hours every morning. Along with the practice, there are lot of things to learn. I feel very productive during these days. I wish you could join me. Looking forward to hear from youYour FriendAzeeha
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let
you know that I
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started
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practicising
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dance
. Recently, I have
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joined
at
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Anugaraha
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Dance
School to learn
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Bharatanatyam
. Among the
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different
areas in classical
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dance
, I am learning the
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Bharatanatyam
. You know that I am fond of classical
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dance
.
Firstly
, it is difficult to coordinate the steps with the music.
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But
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now
I am enjoying each and every moment.
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Whenever
I
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dance
I feel that I am stepping into a new realm. I know that you
also
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love
to
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dance
, The teachers and students are
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very
supportive. I practice two to three hours every morning. Along with the practice, there are
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lot of
things to learn. I feel
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very
productive during these days. I wish you could
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join
me. Looking forward
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to hear
from
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FriendAzeeha
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. Tell your friend about a new hobby that you have just started doing. Explain what you like about it. Write between 100 – 120 words.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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