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write a letter to a company you have worked for and save what you think about the good or weak points of the company say whether you think some change should be made.

write a letter to a company you have worked for and save what you think about the good or weak points of the company say whether you think some change should be made. kegQO
Dear Mr. Waziri I am writing this letter to inform you about some positive and negative experiences that I have been faced during the years which I have worked in the company. First of all, I would like to mention that it is a great honor to me and enjoyable to work with such a famous company with so experienced engineers, designers, and workers. Also, Here there are a lot of updated machines, implementation technics and high-quality materials which have been using in projects for years. Besides all, good features that the company has, there are some negative points that I am faced with like experience and in my point of view, it is important to mention them. Firstly, there is a time delay in salary paying and a lot of Workers dispute about low salary as well. secondly, planning and timetable for implementation and deadline of the projects are weak and according to the plan, two projects must be finished until now and is caused some critics against of company. finally, the cost Price of the project is so high and it needs some new revision in company policy. I would like to express my concern about some of these inappropriate trends and propose Some Solutions for these matters. From my point of view, the company should increase worker's salaries as well as paying their money on time. The project needs regular planning in regard to the deadlines and timetables which we could hire expert about this matter. In terms of the project cost, we should have a special economical provision which will be caused to money-saving in our projects. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely
Dear Mr.
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Waziri


I am writing this letter to inform you about
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some
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positive
and
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negative
experiences that I have
been faced
during the years which I have worked in the
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company
.

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First of all
, I would like to mention that it is a great honor to me and enjoyable to work with such a
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famous
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company
with
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so
experienced engineers, designers, and workers.
Also
, Here there are
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a lot of
updated machines, implementation
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technics
and high-quality materials which have been using in
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projects
for years.

Besides
all,
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good
features that the
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company
has, there are
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some
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negative
points that I
am faced
with like experience and in my point of view, it is
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important
to mention them.
Firstly
, there is a time delay in salary paying and
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a lot of
Workers dispute about low salary
as well
.
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secondly
, planning and timetable for implementation and deadline of the
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projects
are weak and according to the plan, two
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projects
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must
be finished
until
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now
and
is caused
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some
critics against of
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company
.
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finally
, the cost Price of the
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project
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
high and it needs
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some
new revision in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
policy.

I would like to express my concern about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of these inappropriate trends and propose
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
Solutions for these matters. From my

point of view, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
should increase worker's salaries
as well
as paying their money on time. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
needs regular planning

in regard to the deadlines and timetables which we could hire expert about this matter. In terms of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
cost, we should have a special economical provision which will
be caused
to money-saving in our projects.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter write a letter to a company you have worked for and save what you think about the good or weak points of the company say whether you think some change should be made.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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