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An email wish happy birthday

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Today is my birthday brother. My brother has been ten yearls-old. The previous day, Khai was take a sad story. A story happened dive in. I am very sad. So, today I have prepared a gift for giving my brother. It isn't invaluable but in metally which are very worth. I wish my brother always happy and study more good. I also hope that Khai will know take on something which Khai done and not stopped do it. Best wishes Hang
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brother
. My
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has been ten yearls-
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. The previous day,
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Khai
was take a sad story. A story happened dive in. I am
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,
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today
I have prepared a gift for giving my
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brother
. It isn't invaluable
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but
in
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metally
which are
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very
worth. I wish my
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brother
always happy and study more
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good
. I
also
hope that
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Khai
will
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know
take on something which
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done and not
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Best wishes

Hang
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IELTS letter An email wish happy birthday

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  American English
2 paragraphs
80 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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