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Letter to family for nanny job in Australia

Letter to family for nanny job in Australia 3Y0bl

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Collins, I am Vibha and I have seen your advertisement in the magazine. I would like to be considered for the job position you are offering. I really would like to work for you because I believe it will be a good experience for both of us. I like to travel and meet new people, this could give me chance to visit Australia and understand people and culture. I have previous experience of taking care of children, currently, I am working for an Irish family and taking care of children, ages three to eight. This was surprising for me because I never thought looking after children would be that rewarding. I really enjoy spending time with them and learned a lot too. I am really patient, tidy, reliable, and hard-working person. In addition, I am an arts graduate and helps children with play, study, and taking care of them. If I had the chance to live with you and your family would be great. I would spend my free time exploring tourist attractions, trying local food, and making new friends. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need further details and recommendations. Thanks & regards, Vibha

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Collins,

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 with play, study, and taking care of them.

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live
 with you and your family would be great. I would spend my free time exploring tourist attractions, trying local food, and making new friends.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to contact me if you need further
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details
 and recommendations.

Thanks & regards,

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