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You have extra concert tickets but you cannot go the concert. You want to give them to your friend. Write a letter her.

You have extra concert tickets but you cannot go the concert. You want to give them to your friend. Write a letter her. 5Lw3D
Dear Zara. I hope this letter finds you in radiant of health and best of spirits. You will be happy to know that Arjit sing will coming in Dhaka next month, I know you are how big fan of Arjit sing. I have bought concert's ticket for my self and others friend, but unfortunately I would not be able to go because of a reason. It would be great if go on my ticket. Actually, concert will be held on 25th september, but on that day I will must have to go Airport for receiving my uncle who will come from UK. So, I want to give my ticket you, if you go my ticket will do not waste. My cousin Sara also would go, if you want you can go with her. I hope you will enjoy the concert because Arjit sing's voice is outstanding and he is a famous singer in Bollywood. Please, confirm me your plan as soon as possible. So, that I can arrange send ticket you though my brother or alternatively you can collect from me by anyone. Hope hear you from soon! Your lovingly Alamgir
Dear Zara.

I hope this letter finds you in radiant of health and best of spirits. You will be happy to know that
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Arjit
sing will
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coming
in Dhaka
next
month, I know you are how
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big
fan of
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Arjit
sing. I have
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bought
concert's
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ticket
for my self
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and others
friend,
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but
unfortunately I would not be able to go
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because
of a reason. It would be great if go on my ticket.

Actually, concert will
be held
on 25th
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september
,
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but
on that day I will
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must
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have to
go Airport for receiving my uncle who will
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come
from UK.
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So
, I want to give my
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ticket
you, if you go my
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ticket
will do not waste. My cousin Sara
also
would go, if you want you can
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go with
her. I hope you will enjoy the concert
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because
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Arjit
sing's voice is
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outstanding and
he is a
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famous
singer in Bollywood.

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Please
, confirm me your plan as
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soon
as possible.
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So
, that I can arrange
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send
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ticket
you though my brother or
alternatively
you can collect from me by anyone.

Hope hear you from
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soon
!

Your
lovingly


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Alamgir
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IELTS letter You have extra concert tickets but you cannot go the concert. You want to give them to your friend. Write a letter her.

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