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Write a letter to the restaurant manager for complaint

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Dear SirI am kapil. I am writing this letter with disappointment that my family and I paid a visit to your restaurant in order to have food. We had heard a lot about your food speciality. However I am having to say plaintively that we were served in a prompt manner. Firstly, the behavior of the staff wasn't beyond description. Nobody was putting on mask and proper uniform. Secondly, the tables and floor wasn't immaculate. There were nothing but flies were hovering around the meal. As far as the meal concerned that we were provided was terrible. Salt was more than required. My father who is coming down with blood pressure had to remain hungry. I hope that you will take this complaint seriously and do something promptly otherwise your bed and breakfast could be at stake. Looking forward to quick action. Yours faithfully

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kapil
. I am writing this letter with disappointment that my family and I paid a visit to your restaurant in order to have food. We had heard a lot about your food Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.specialty
speciality
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I am having to say plaintively
 that we were served
Consider replacing "in a prompt manner" with the adverb for "prompt"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a prompt manner
. Firstly
, the behavior of the staff wasn't beyond description. Nobody was putting on mask and proper uniform. Secondly
, the tables and floor wasn't immaculate. There were nothing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 flies were hovering around the meal. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 far as the meal concerned that we were provided
 was terrible. Salt was more than required. My father who is coming down with blood pressure had to remain hungry. I hope that you will take this complaint seriously
 and do something promptly
otherwise
 your bed and breakfast could be at stake. Looking forward to quick action. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfaithfully.faithfully!faithfully?faithfully:faithfully,faithfully;
faithfully

IELTS letter Write a letter to the restaurant manager for complaint

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

143 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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