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Write a letter to a bus company about things you lost in a bus

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my crucial belongings when I travelled via bus of your company few days ago. Let me explain in detail. Actually, I made my journey from Chandigarh to Delhi with your company 'Akash Travels' on 3/3/2020. I was going to a business meeting to Delhi, and moreover I was having my laptop with me. Since I was going for an official meeting with the delegates of my company, so I was working on my presentation, which I need to present there. But, unfortunately, when I reached my destination, in my hurry, I forgot the laptop carry bag in the bus. Though it is not so much costly, it contains some essential visiting cards and my documents as well. I would like you to post those essential things at my home address, which I am enclosing with this letter. Please let me know the charges involved. I would pay the expenses either by money order or by online banking as per your convenience. Hoping for a favourable action from you in this regard. Yours' faithfully Kajal Maan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my crucial belongings when I travelled via bus of your
company
few days ago.

Let
me
explain
in detail. Actually, I made my journey from Chandigarh to Delhi with your
company
'Akash Travels' on 3/3/2020. I was going to a business meeting to Delhi, and
moreover
I was having my laptop with me.

Since I was going for an official meeting with the delegates of my
company
,
so
I was working on my presentation, which I need to present there.
But
, unfortunately, when I reached my destination, in my hurry, I forgot the laptop carry bag in the bus. Though it is not
so
much costly, it contains
some
essential visiting cards and my documents
as well
.

I would like you to post those essential things at my home address, which I am enclosing with this letter.
Please
let
me know the charges involved. I would pay the expenses either by money order or by online banking as per your convenience.

Hoping for a
favourable
action from you in this regard.

Yours'
faithfully


Kajal
Maan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a bus company about things you lost in a bus

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
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