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You ordered a book online but your order didnt come on time . Write a letter to a manager.

You ordered a book online but your order didnt come on time. Write a letter to a manager. BloAV
Dear sirI am writing to show my dissatisfaction that book which i ordered from online. I payed it by net but your company didnt bring it on time. in order to this course i want to express my deep rejection. I WANTED TO GIVE IT to my best friend on his beirthday. WHAT i want is your justice and stricct order in your company. I hope you will answer positively to my questions. AND ALSO give me my book which i ordered to your company online. your sincerely Katie.
Dear
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am
writing to
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show
my dissatisfaction that book which
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i
ordered from online. I
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payed
it by net
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but
your
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company
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didnt
bring it on time.
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in
order to this course
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i
want to express my deep rejection. I WANTED TO GIVE IT to my best friend on his
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beirthday
. WHAT
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i
want is your justice and
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stricct
order in your
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company
. I hope you will answer
positively
to my questions. AND
ALSO
give me my book which
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i
ordered to your
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company
online.
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your
sincerely
Katie.
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IELTS letter You ordered a book online but your order didnt come on time. Write a letter to a manager.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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