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Write a letter the head of your firm about can not attend their anniversary

Write a letter the head of your firm about can not attend their anniversary keYK8

Dear Sir and Madam, I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary. Unfortunately, I regret not being able to attend this party because of my sister's wedding that day. My sister has been living and working in New -York city for a long time. We haven't seen him in a long time. The last time she came to our family ceremony two years ago. I was consequently excited to hear about my sister's wedding and want to leave for New- York a few days ago. I congratulate you on your 25th anniversary and wish you a good time. I am sorry to miss it. I hope we will have the opportunity to meet. Yours faithfully, Mary Neilson

Dear Sir and Madam, I thank you for your recent invitation to your 25th wedding anniversary. Unfortunately, I regret not being able to attend this party This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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time
. We haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 she came to our family ceremony two years ago. I was consequently
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leave
 for New- York a few days ago. I congratulate you on your 25th anniversary and wish you a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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time
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 am sorry to miss it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 hope we will have the opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
. Yours faithfully
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