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Hope this finds you well. Recently, I have seen your advertisement in newspaper that you are hiring staff to do unpaid work to help people at the hospital. I have been always wanting to work for community since I was in my school. I really want to help people who needs to look after in certain situations. I find this very helpful for me as well because this position suits me, as I always wanted to do this kind of social work. Going ahead I am glad to letting you know that i would be very keen to do work, whichever you will ask me to do. I will take your guidance in regards to follow and achieve desired goals at the hospital. I will be very happy to help the hospital patients to get well as soon as possible by providing them good and healthy food and of course a good familiar environment. Lastly, I would like to conclude that I am happy to start as soon as possible, And for this week I am available from Monday. I will be very much great full if you consider me for this work and It will be pleasure to work with you. Yours Sincerely David Tom

Hope this finds you well.

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Yours Sincerely


David Tom