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You have bought a new jewelry from a shop. But it is not inferior. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought.

You have bought a new jewelry from a shop. But it is not inferior. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought. mbW0A
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to complain about a scratchy jewelry. I purchased it from your company ten days ago. When you were selling it, you said that it was very tolerant. Firstly, it was seemed like that what you imparted. On the contrary it was not made as your employees told. A number of days ago, I had to fly to London. At this point I wore my new trimming what I merchandised from your shop. When I became at New York airport, I lost it and it was found. Later, this event recapitulated again. After that I advertised everyone and it was brought by someone. While the stuff was marketing by your workers, I was said that it was rather broad-minded. However, it was not what you told me. Furthermore, it was enounced that the item was whopping healthily and quite hard-bitten. And also you quothed if the goods isn't well, we will change it to other object or turn back your money. Therefore, I contacted at your company on Monday last week. Though, your employees said that nothing could be done about my problem. I would sent the jewelry back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would sent a refund. However, I still have not received one. As a regular customer of yours I feel disappointed with the way hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate affection. Your faithfully. Sarah.
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to complain about a scratchy jewelry. I
purchased
it from your
company
ten days ago. When you were selling it, you said that it was
very
tolerant.
Firstly
, it
was seemed
like that what you imparted.
On the contrary
it was not made as your employees
told
. A number of days ago, I had to
fly
to London. At this point I wore my new trimming what I merchandised from your shop. When I became at New York airport, I lost it and it
was found
. Later, this
event
recapitulated again. After that I advertised everyone and it
was brought
by someone. While the stuff was marketing by your workers, I
was said
that it was
rather
broad-minded.
However
, it was not what you
told
me.
Furthermore
, it was
enounced
that the item was whopping
healthily
and quite
hard
-bitten. And
also
you
quothed
if the
goods
isn't well, we will
change
it to other object or turn back your money.
Therefore
, I contacted at your
company
on Monday last week.
Though
, your employees said that nothing could
be done
about my problem. I would
sent
the jewelry back to your shop after having
been assured
by one of the assistants that I would
sent
a refund.
However
, I
still
have not received one.
As
a regular customer of yours I feel disappointed with the way hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate affection. Your
faithfully
. Sarah.
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IELTS letter You have bought a new jewelry from a shop. But it is not inferior. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the shop where you bought.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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