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One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend.

One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. VQBkK
Dear Raj, I hope you are doing well and all is good in London. I am sorry. I write this letter after a long time. But I am so busy in my work. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I am changed my job and my new company is located in your city. You already live in the city so you know about this company verywell. I am so worried and so tensed about this full time job. I searched many contract baised job. But never found related to my skill and fild job. So I choose this job. You know about my experience and field work. I have worked in many companies in our city. So I think I do verywell in London. You spend plethora of time there, you know about the salary pakages in the area, work place and employes are so helpful compair to other place. It will be so helpful for me to you already live there. It is good for me. I'm waiting for your reply. Warm wishes, Jaineel
Dear Raj, I hope you are doing well and all is
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good
in London. I am sorry. I write this letter after a long time.
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But
I am
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so
busy in my work. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I am
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changed
my
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job
and my new
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company
is located
in your city. You already
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live
in the city
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so
you know about this
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company
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verywell
. I am
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so
worried and
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so
tensed about this full time
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job
. I searched
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many
contract
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baised
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job
.
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But
never found related to my
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skill
and
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fild
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job
.
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So
I choose this
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job
. You know about my experience and field work. I have worked in
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many
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companies
in our city.
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So
I
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think
I do
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verywell
in London. You spend plethora of time there, you know about the salary
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pakages
in the area, work place and
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employes
are
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so
helpful
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compair
to other place. It will be
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so
helpful for me to you already
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live
there. It is
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good
for me. I'm waiting for your reply.

Warm wishes,
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Jaineel
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IELTS letter One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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