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write an email to the president of the club (about 120-150 words). Tell them your thoughts about the cancelled trip to the scientific centre to see the robortic device

write an email to the president of the club (about 120-150 words). Tell them your thoughts about the cancelled trip to the scientific centre to see the robortic device EdrM3
Dear SerI am a new member of the club of technological devices and decided to write to inform you about cancelled visiting our group to the scientific cenrtre to learn more about the robortic device accordingly to the letter from the president of the centre because of shortage number of our attendance. In this case I want to offer you some supportive ideas to develop the relationship between the science centre asking your allowance to organize a ceminar in our club about the new technology devices in morden life making our club presentation for the intraduction our future plan to improve the creativity and knowledge which includes each member presentations and decided to invite the president of the centre to the event. I think my trying will help us for the future relationship with other important for our club people. With best regardsa monitor of technology clubJohn Dereck
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SerI
am a new member of the
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club
of technological devices and decided to write to inform you about cancelled visiting our group to the scientific
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cenrtre
to learn more about the
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robortic
device
accordingly
to the letter from the president of the
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centre
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because
of shortage number of our attendance.
In this case
I want to offer you
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some
supportive
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ideas
to develop the relationship between the science
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centre
asking your allowance to organize a
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ceminar
in our
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club
about the new technology devices in
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morden
life making our
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club
presentation for the
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intraduction
our future plan to
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improve
the creativity and knowledge which includes each member presentations and decided to invite the president of the
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centre
to the
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event
. I
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think
my trying will
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help
us for the future relationship with other
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important
for our
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club
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people
. With best
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regardsa
monitor of technology
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clubJohn
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Dereck
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IELTS letter write an email to the president of the club (about 120-150 words). Tell them your thoughts about the cancelled trip to the scientific centre to see the robortic device

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  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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