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Dear Mrs Johnson, I am writing to inquire about London where you went to University. Due to the fact I want to go on vacation there next week and know about the City of London. Firstly, I want to stay in a comfortable hotel close to the city center at a reasonable price. I wonder if you could give me information about the convenient places to spend the night, hotel locations, prices and amenities. Secondly, I am keen on European countries. It would be interested to know how evening entertainment is and what types of cultural places are popular. I hope you can help me with these details. Thank you in advance your help. Yours sincerely, Emma Watson.
Dear Mrs Johnson, I am writing to inquire about London where you went to University. Due to the fact I want to go on vacation there
next
week and know about the City of London.
Firstly
, I want to stay in a comfortable hotel close to the city center at a reasonable price. I wonder if you could give me information about the convenient places to spend the night, hotel locations, prices and amenities.
Secondly
, I am keen on European countries. It would
be interested
to know how evening entertainment is and what types of cultural places are popular. I hope you can
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help
me with these
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details
. Thank you in advance your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. Yours
sincerely
, Emma Watson.
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  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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