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Talk about your day and Where are you traveling.

Talk about your day and Where are you traveling. rY6ro
Hey there, this is my last day here in Rehanli; we are getting off at 11 o'clouck. To be honest there is nothing to do here, everything is boring, notwithstanding living with uncle but really i have felt tired and not that comfortable. maybe due to my forwithcoming English exam in Ankara on the seventh of August. However i feel myself dirty and i want to get home as soon as possible. İn addition, the weather is baking and me too. Please send a plane to pick me up from Hatay to Gaziantep. The situation here is good for invesment, but we need a fortune literally.
Hey there, this is my last day here in
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clouck
. To be honest there is nothing to do here, everything is boring, notwithstanding living with uncle
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really
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have felt tired and not that comfortable.
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forwithcoming
English exam in Ankara on the seventh of August.
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However
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feel myself dirty and
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want to
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get
home as
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as possible.
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addition, the weather is baking and me too. P
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a p
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to pick me up from
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we need a fortune
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IELTS letter Talk about your day and Where are you traveling.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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