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Invitation letter for wedding party

Invitation letter for wedding party 7r0Bk
Dear Jimmy. I am writing this letter on behalf of my family to invite you and your family member to my wedding party. I would be grateful for you if you could take part in the party. I am organising it on Saturday evening July 4 in addition to this it will start at 1 pm furthermore the dinner will be given at 6 pm. On this occasion is extremely important for me as a consequence of this I invited popular singers in order to be unforgettable in every person’s life. Besides that, dancers and magicians will be participated and showed new illustrations. At the end of this event my darling cut the cake and give a gif which is no one know what it is. All in all you will never pity for coming to this. Please confirm me whether you come or not. By the way, I wrote a right direction due to the fact that you won’t have any difficulties for coming. I look forward to participating my wedding party. Angela Joe.
Dear Jimmy. I am writing this letter on behalf of my family to invite you and your family member to my wedding party. I would be grateful for you if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the party.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
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organising
it on Saturday evening July 4
in addition
to this it will
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start
at 1 pm
furthermore
the dinner will be
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given
at 6 pm. On this occasion is
extremely
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important
for me as a consequence of this I invited popular singers in order to be unforgettable in every person’s life.
Besides
that, dancers and magicians will
be participated
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
new illustrations. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this
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event
my darling
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cut
the cake and give a
Possible spelling mistake found.
gif
which is no one know what it is. All in all you will never pity for coming to this.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
confirm me whether you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
or not. By the way, I wrote a right direction due to the fact that you won’t have any difficulties for coming. I look forward to participating my wedding party. Angela Joe.

IELTS letter Invitation letter for wedding party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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